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@75
I remember being bored, confused, losing interest, getting a headache and being a bit grossed out by the romantic angles in this. I must have been invested to get this far, but that's gone and I don't think I care to remember why I liked this cause I don't care what happens. Next.
@20
Dark, heavy and murderously revengeful. Tbh, it's good, but she's gonna get caught by self-righteous people who did NOTHING to protect her and she will be killed or jailed or exiled and I'm not here for it. She has little to no planning and I don't see her scheming a ploy to get away w/ murder. I hate seeing justified self-defense killers getting the consequences that their own perpetrators should've gotten but we KNOW they would get away w/ it if she didn't kill them. They deserved it.
@65
If you're not thinking, it's fine, but once you start, this is just a big confusing headache. The pacing's poor(leads to absurd char reactions/decisions), the char+rel's are horribly built up (Idu ML/ML's thinking at all, why ML loves MC or why MC's parents treat her as a forgotten by-product), the dialogue causes migraines and as all powerful as they are made to sound, in the face of all the schemes+dangers, MC and her father are always doing . . . nothing really? Got boring+annoying.
@16
I remembered hating this mainly cause the tl was bad and the dialogue made me want to murder. Anyway, I hated MC's cowardly char that was weak, couldn't do anything and didn't want to do anything, even to her enemies. The author seemed to actively forget some char's were in a certain scene, so MC often became 'isolated' and that made the storytelling confusing and it did not flow. To me, the plot wasn't all that intriguing to continue reading this mess?
@70
I remember this being one of the most infuriating, nauseating plots I'd ever read. I cried a lot. If I were MC, I'd have killed myself than be subject to that kind of horrible life in a place that's can't understand your body's biology. MC's stronger than I am. I would've liked him to go back to his own world, but Idt this will go there, and not much is keeping me here. Idk how I got this far in this horrid story. Everyone loves this one but me. Wish MC all the best and a backbone. Ciao.
@05
Oh, I really hated this one. I remember this was gross and headache-inducing. I like a good thriller/horror but this was super creepy in the worst way and I couldn't decide who I hated the most. Really not my thing. It's a nope from me.
@0.5
Hated from the onset.
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