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A solid, really good, interesting story. What kills it is that ML's clearly living up some narrow dark cave of his+his inflated ego is suffocating his brain in the tiny restricted space. How many times will MC casually save you by using his eyes/while touching your chest+you just accuse him of SA?? SA accusations are disgusting, unfunny+irredeemable. It's sick. You're in a Hosp RM+yk his abilities? MC explained multiple times. Why's your putrid mind immediately going to SA? ML's repulsive. DNF?
That proposal was so beautiful, personal and touching. I'm glad he finally got it right. The cutest part of it was still him choosing out his outfit, acting all clever-like cause MC loves him best in white. Adorable. I was really angry at the beginning but this was one of the very few stories actually worth the suffering. Not many get it right.
Hella annoyed that he's leaving evil people w/ nothing but ill will alive, knowing they'll cause trouble/even disaster. Just cause his friends said, 'Don't kill mindlessly,' he leaves them alive. Yk, that's just the author wanting as many plot points and devices at his disposal as possible.
Asura comment: ". . see the potential in even the rotten . . . saving even a single person could be saving many more than just one/it could do the opposite but it is still better to save them."
Ew, no. DNF?
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