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Other than the fact that MC and author are wired to be too stupid to be true, I don't like this 'magic will fix everything' issue; it's just a matter of how much you use. Magic can fix things, but if you don't find the cause, you can't fix the issue at the root, and it should recur since it's like a superficial bandage rather than a meticulous cure.
Let's not even go into the power imbalance and 'rapey, lack of chemistry' feel, imo, the art so bad that the servant's expressions never know what it's doing. Is he scared, constipated, hocked up on laughing gas? Certainly not gonna tell me that's his sexy 'I don't want it but I want it' expression. I'll laugh myself to death.
MC's so focused on her romance w/ ML and getting away from ML to not 'complicate' the plot, that she can't be bothered to let ML know info, such as he has a mirror in his house that can be used to see the Crown Prince regularly? You don't think that's smth to let him know in case he doesn't already? No thoughts cross your mind about a spy/conspiracies or nothing? You just blushing cause ML's face after you repeatedly broke his heart for stupid reasons? Okay, psycho.
When getting accused, you STARE and do nothing to explain, except say in your HEAD, "Stop" when you have a mouth+plenty of time to say the short explanation. Accusers leave the room and NOW you have a lot to say? You TRANSMIGRATE but a pop-up window shocks you sm, you tell your accuser that you're seeing it, just to what, look crazy? You escape but when the window keeps talking and your response to it SHOULD be in your head, you FINALLY shout out loud, "SHUT UP" to the person helping you. MIMS.
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