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i usually like stories w possessive mls, but im not rly feeling this one lol. idk, i think some parts of the story seem a bit forced. i get that ml fell in love at first sight, but he was obsessed w fl right then and there . fl also just fell in love w ml after they fucked. i think that the story’s okay, but the pacing isn’t to my liking. there isn’t rly much buildup, so it feels that most of the characters are one-dimensional
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The way you rate things are just immaculate, so easy to comprehend. Thanks for doing the good work brother. Someone has to collect works of fiction for the mentally ill, and you’ve done a fine job taking up the mantle