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i’m trying to like this u guys i rly am. ml is pretty obsessive, even getting to a point where he wants to kill fl if he can’t have her. it’s just the plot i don’t like. it’s cliche and the build up isn’t building up. if u wanna read for the yandere guy go ahead, but the story’s kinda boring and not rly my cup of tea
ml is so . fl is betrayed by everyone she trusted so she goes and proposes a contractual marriage w ml. ml gives her 2 conditions for the marriage. 1) she forgets about her ex husband and 2) she stays married w him forever. he’s such a yearner i can’t. i will say tho that the story isn’t focused on ml’s obsessiveness. it’s more of a revenge story for fl to fuck up everyone that wronged her
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The way you rate things are just immaculate, so easy to comprehend. Thanks for doing the good work brother. Someone has to collect works of fiction for the mentally ill, and you’ve done a fine job taking up the mantle