mc have this tendency to react way too slowww. like he'll wait for his opponent to finish their power up, destroy half the city, before saying "what have you done". like bro, as if you didn't have time to stop them from doing the deed!
pretty good; have potential; it's going the direction i like
10/10 for now
11/10
all the charactes feels real and unique; the choices they make and actions they take all aligns with their character. rare. almost all characters are likable.
great world building.
love mc's personality
the girls are kinda annoying tho
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