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no unnecessary drama, like the kids, need more sides with them overall chill
i liked the first half a lot the second half was decent n the ending made me cry i wished there was more scenes of the ml n fl developing into the marriage i liked how the sides gave alt endings with the 3 other sides personally liked the knight/ duke most n the guildmaster the least
basic isekai villianous plot (lil borin in the middle) ml is green flag wish the og emperor (ml father) actually got a punishment rather than just stepping down when he did so much evil too i liked the sides with the kids
yandere, ml n fl r opp of the same coin rlly did not like the king n crown prince wish we got to c there kids or the og ml future story, kept me entertained throughout
beginning was a bit boring but found the end part to be satisfying no crazy misunderstanding/ drama
there is no sides but i rlly enjoyed the read the fl actually grew n is strong ml is green flag i also liked the pacing i want to c the sides of there kids n noelle n arwin kids
sorry was satisfying like how the villain got to take his own poison at first didn’t like how dom ml was so manipulative but at the end toned down so enjoyed n the premise of friends is relatable
the pacing is a bit fast, fl is strong n ml is a supporting green flag, wish there were sides with romance btwn ml n fl n there kids
97 chap
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