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Boring title
- Stereotypical badass MC wannabe
- endured for ur late mother? lame excuse
- START w the action, not irrelevant info, late intro @ ch5
- weird narration
- Cons: flat MC, no Emotional Dynamic Change, no excitement or curiosity, we could've wondered if she actually lived up to the rumors around her, feel nervous for her cuz her attitude give ppl reason to dislike her
- Mary Sue & Gary Stu meeting?
- she's more funny aloof but art translation = pretty, but pretty boring
I'm starting to realize a trend in my preference
I dislike stories abt wanting to live in peace ("The Lady Wants to Rest" was nice tho)
this story is boring cuz there's barely any action, motivation, twist, or relationship building
If these two Mains were background characters, it'd prob be better
literally every other character is energetic/interesting, EXCEPT for the MC;;;
and what does poison guy like abt MC anyways? are you Gary Stu???
small parts I liked about this story before dropping:
- finding out that the crown prince had a soft spot for and either took the poison cuz it's from her or consumed anything cuz it's from her
- finding out that the crown prince was a really great guy and genuinely cares deeply for her in her next life
But, I dropped cuz I don't like the FL, her toxic ex-fiance and family, unpleasant female competition and characters
uh =o H o=
focused on too many things = the story felt choppy and messy, not solid
blondy too powerful, magic and dragon stuff were flimsy with no consistancy
tbh I also just didn't understand what was happenening half way
and an important powerful white dragon died for the plot??
I don't feel the weight of dragons in this world at all, realistically, and then for kingdom(s) to want to kill other kingdom's dragon
I had high expectations, but it ended up falling flat
Originally was excited to see the growth between the Villainess & Heroine. They were getting a nice development, but we never saw it through
As for the MC, his first meeting w the 2 romantic interests were cute, guessing who gave him the mysterious bite marks was exciting, but I eventually didn't like others violating his personal space like that
This story lacks spiritual connection/relationship building & focus too spread out
adorable but ur an adult but u got trauma
Introduction: was abused and was saved easily by the duke who bought her. she was cautious but the maids made her feel welcomed. her father has issues. some mysterious prince~ or wizard? only FL can see his true form (black n red) nothing special
What's the goal? What are the scenes that makes her a likeable FL? Things can't just magically happen & be in her favor w/out some structure (reason, debuff, reward)
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