the art is gorgeous, let’s give it that; the relationship is off putting to me—the mc has no discernible personality outside of being “different” and the same goes for the ml
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the art is making my eye twitch—whenever fl’s are soldiers or knights, you have to try hard to not make them seem “not like the other girls”; its annoying when they’re written surrounding their gender instead of their character + the ml is just.. dumb —> forgettable
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no nO NO— don’t play with me rn, this is some hot ass garbage, everything about it upsets me. the art, the story; people put time and effort into this??
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was very conflicted by this because the premise was already pretty basic but the execution was good—and then they ruin it with an unnecessary love triangle, ngl the other guy was more attractive to me
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