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This story shot itself on the foot when they said 10 supporting male leads immediate red flags like there’s no way they can make 10 well developed characters with flaws and strengths who follow the exact same role in the story without making this manwha 400+ chapters long

This girl woke up and started speaking gibberish

Please I beg someone make an actual manwha with good art about this story please I will raise an altar

So lemme get this straight, this woman has fought in a MOTHERFUCKING war for the past years of her life (only with men I would guess cause they never show her having knight/warrior female friends) and the first time the man shows his abs she’s all blushing and shit??? Girlie I’m sorry never been to a war but I feel like you’d have seen shirtless men before right??? Even to just treat wounds or some shit no issues being prude or more conservative but this all seems a lil silly

There aren’t really stakes ig?? She has lived 999 lives and seems to have no mental burdens besides a slight distrust that gets resolved in chapter 4, she claims she has lived for 2000 years but we just don’t really feel that as a reader, whoever her therapist is pls give me a number cause holy hell

Listen..you shouldn’t judge a book by its cover…however when the cover is really fucking ugly- chapter one boy do I have complaints this girl is a dumbass I swear she says she doesn’t want to marry him cause “he is the ogML and will abandon her for other bich” so she will- haha my dear reader you thought there was a big plan ha! No<3 she’ll just be sold to an old pervert…that’s her plan… that’s genuinely the rest of her plan…refuse hot guy to get sold off

This story suffers from the “Dont fucking do anything you dumb bich” plothole cause If her family is really that powerful to get an engagment with the tyrant then she could legit just do nothing until the ML and ogFL fall in love that he will probably not kill her and break off their engagment to marry whatever her name is + the side plots are dreadfully dull

It’s like being jumped by a bunch of people you don’t know but the next moment they aren’t there anymore and you believe yourself to be schizophrenic you know?

So..many…characters..y’all have trouble writing a consistent character so you wanna try 15??