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- Uh...Is it on hiatus. It hasn't been updated yet. It has like 44 chaps already, but no intimate parts yet. I guess because they were still a child. But we got a peek with their grown up self in the latest chap, that's why I can't wait for more chaps. The first parts focuses more on the mc and family relationship. I can't wait for the romantic genre to come. They are sooo cute btw>_<.
- I marinated this. Glad, I did 'cause I found out that it was supposed to have a sad ending, but was later continued. This was smhw a good read. I feel so broken. Like literally, everytime I see his beat up face, I just feel like something broke. I like the fact that yellow haired didn't give up in pursuing him and later got a happy ending. The only regret here is WE NEED MORE OF THEIR MOMENTS c'mon give us a kiss scene and some wholesome moments huehue
- This has a lot of potential if it wasn't rushed. The ending felt rushed. There were certainly plot holes. Like what happened to the other routes and why can he also feel and see the system? How come it was editable? Like there many plot holes, but it was still a good read. I still liked it, nevertheless.
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