Completed

cute story about a bi-curious dude being chased by his two best friends

Epilogue:
Main couple: Took a one year break (to study for CSAT) before getting back together
2nd couple: Started dating after the older one came back from military service
3rd couple: Staying strong and studying abroad
4th (potential) couple: Seems to have feelings for each other but go to different universities

The author says everyone will be fine, so I will take their word for it. Every couple has a happy ending!

good plot; weak execution; stiff art

i remember reading it (back in 2016?) and being disappointed with the plot. i’ll give it another read and see if i’ll change my mind

read it again: maybe it’s because i’m older now, but i can understand the story better. it wasn’t as bad as my initial read. some things could have been done better, but overall, it was a good story from an amateur author. has reread value. though the same plot points and dialogues are used in ‘Mad Dog.’

good story for an author’s debut work, but author doesn’t have a strong understanding of their own characters (sometimes OOC) and the incorporation of aboriginal culture could be done in a less problematic way. ending was nice though.