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Op mc, v strong promising young man, action packed. Likeable and Chill Mc, capable & smart.
Fun, idol mc capable straight forward character. It’s actually pretty refreshing and interesting, not mainstream story telling. Also got much better later on.
Interesting, a bit too naive of writing, but it seems wholesome and nice build up
tad interesting, just coz the mc is decisive enough.
Hmm it’s ok I skim some bcause it got boring but it’s an okay read, mc getting more powerful he has different kind of magic
It’s pretty good, progress ok too, mc also ok strong and sensible. Just sometimes many unnecessary talking about the origin magic
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