The FL is a fan of the ML since he was her favorite character in a gay story, always siding with him, sticking to him, and does almost everything with him. The ML has a father that neglects him and he grows up to not take his bs.
The problem comes from their relationship. The ML is obsessed with the Fl where it doesn't seem like love and the FL is just really a devoted fan. The relationship so far is very toxic. In my opinion, this kinda sucks. I guess I just like healthy relationships.
I think the main problem to this story is the amount of scenes and the consistent use of "tiny FL" and "Big scary hunk of a man ML". Overall, the use of tiny FL is always a bit odd, how they're innocent and stuff. Like, maybe you're just interested in children cuz that's what you're describing rn. Also, the scenes. Love can be shown in other ways and I hate when stories keep adding scene after scene. It's just a lot of repetitive tropes.
This is not bad, rather the opposite. This is one of my favorites BUT, the inclusion of romance. This did not need romance at all as it wasn't one of the ML's goals at all. Romance was not a driving force for him and it was random. It wasn't needed at all and that's what made it go downhill for me. IN MY OPINION, the story should've ended either after chapter 179 or around the first few parts of the epilogs(I don't think I spelled that right.)
Similar to Solo Leveling, this isn't bad but the not needed romance is. It's shown in the last few chapters with the ML. It's not a driving force for him and seems like a last minute thought. I get that it's two characters that have problems but it was sudden. If they met earlier and the ML would cook for the two of them, their drive to help her overcome her problem but no. They introduce the two together at the end and that's it.
I was pissed off reading the entire thing. Most of this hate is directed towards Bjorn (male lead) but some to Erna (main character). The ONLY good character is Lisa (maid of mc) as she tells Erna to not be with Bjorn as he is a bad person and is known to be bad but does so anyways. Their relationship is just toxic and Bjorn is a huge red flag. She would be better with her childhood friend, Patos or whatever his name is. I understand the name is "The problematic prince" but he can rot :)
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