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I thought fl was gay bc manger shin was a girl but turns out he’s a boy. The pronouns need to be updated. Overall js not interested.
First chapter pmo I js had to drop after. The ml is so shitty.. yeah you were insensitive but you should never say such things after a miscarriage. Also how did fl even think to marry him in the first place.
This has great potential and amazing art. I js wasn’t very interested and it felt like a very predictable outcome. I’m sure others would love to read tho
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