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This story tries to be deep but just feels messy. Hale is supposed to be a scary assassin, but he turns soft way too fast for no real reason. Marine, the girl, is super naive and kind of useless. Their romance feels random and forced, like it just had to happen for the plot.
The characters don’t make much sense, and the story gets boring fast. You keep hoping it’ll get better, but it doesn’t. Honestly, it’s a waste of a cool idea.
Honestly, this manhwa has potential, and the plot isn’t bad, but I just didn’t like the FL. She was quite a pushover, and since she never craved lust before, suddenly craving it now made her seem like she was abusing the power. Dio should’ve never came into her life, legit using people to make wine. Leave that poor girl alone. This really wasn’t my vibe, but I’m sure others might find it interesting!
what is this plot.. Sharing a boyfriend? I need a better ml, how could he be doing all these things without feeling guilty.. not even a single bit of empathy for the Fl. She’s too forgiving and a total pushover. Step up your game girly, you need a comeback era. Also is anyone getting mixed vibes from the fl bsf? Like is she a good character or bad character. How does she not feel weird giving her bf to her bsf.
UGHH if only there wasn’t such a huge age gap.. 10 YEARS??
I just couldn’t keep up with the misleading information anymore, the lying age got me. I wonder how she’s gonna react when she realizes she’s been talking to a literal kid in school PFFT (๑˃ꇴ˂๑)
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