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it’s a fun read but there are some details that just don’t make sense. why do they keep insisting to leave her behind when she’s so much better than all of them at swordsmanship?? like it’s a point of conflict at least twice. it should be HER leaving ur bum asses behind. Also if her husband was acting as a giglo for the emperor why did he have commoner mistresses?? How is that politically helpful?
it’s okay. above average but not incredibly captivating.
it’s funny - but it doesn’t make sense to me why her dad is mean to her and not her sister. okay so you don’t think she got this power you wanted neither did the other girl bc she didn’t have the traits to possibly have it in the first place. even if it’s purely from a person being useful standpoint she def still could have been. i also think that if the FL was locked up since 5 she wouldn’t have been as well adjusted even if she see outside and in her past life with water.
got to chapter 91 and there’s still like 50 chapters to go even though the story is basically over. crazy work . it’s meh
boring. makes me laugh that everything is named after children. like their last name is Child and a guards name is actually Children like okay guys we get it
finished. deals with darker themes. it’s nice and the pair make sense for each other.
could’ve been good but just wasn’t. her being a reincarnator had almost no bearing on the story other than she knew bad things were going to happen in the future but zero specifics. so it probably shouldn’t have been a reincarnation coming but ♀
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