beta
I commend the FL's ferocity so to speak, but the story is jumping too fast, yet not enough. Character development has the barest bullet points before leaping towards the finish line of the cliche "FL-on-top". It had potential, but the emotional development wasn't done well, and panders to the consumable preferences of isekai-bingers. It could've been good, it could've been better. It's just disappointing
I don't remember why, but it was tiring
First 30 chapters, then go on your merry way. Our interesting independent FL becomes a mess of cliches and damselling and ML just isn't in the story most of the time
It was sort of interesting at the start, but I'm tired of iffy executions of tropes. Do it well and it's fantastic. Do it meh and it's worse than meh. I've tried multiple times to read it because I liked the original premise and the grandfather character, but it's just not interesting. Translation is not great. Personally, don't waste your time
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