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This is quite good. Although the premise is cliché & the story execution has room for improvement, the pacing is good. Characters are likeable. The kids are good & adorable. I like that the complex emotions, struggles & inner turmoils of characters were explored. I also like that the family members help & care for each other despite the difficulties & their differences.
It's funny and a light read. The characters are likeable. The MC acts like a child (cause she is obviously) but she's not annoying. Rather, she's adorable.
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