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MC is proactive. I like her! The father, on the other hand, is a wuss. I mean, I understand his worries but...idk man, at least fight to live for your daughter ugh
The pacing is fast. There's a lot of plot holes, discarded/forgotten characters, unsolved plot points, etc. There's a lot going on. The only redeeming quality is, the MC is OP from the start, stands up for herself & doesn't take shit from people. Oh, and she didn't forgive his trash of a father AS SHE SHOULD!
It's mid. MC is cute but whenever she shares information from the novel and was asked where she got that info from... she's like, "Trust me bro." Lol. I prefer MCs who's cunning, sly, uses their head, plans ahead, and clever. Also, most of the supporting characters became fond of her so quickly there's no substance to their relationships at all.
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