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Love the concept of fl transmigrating into a different body while ml has his memories from the 1st round. Cant wait the reveal & how all of this will plan out. I like the fl but i loved her more when she looked like a literal dominant mommy, now shes just a pink puff ball. Anyways, everything is cute with the side of plot, i wonder where the real loulou is?
I see you gem or I hope it is, an fl who has a disability....lets see where this will go. For now with few chapters there isnt anything to say much but it does spark an interest in wanting to know more about it. Atleast ml seems to think for himself & knows how the fl is truly being treated
This one is quite interesting with all the mess up timeline. For now i get the gist that something went wrong with fls birth which cause her to be older. Its a cool concept once you truly get to learn Everything & read this, with why the dad acts that way, the way youd feel bad for her brothers & fl herself with how much she endured. This is a fun read ngl, but my only irk is the age gap between fl & ml in the coming future.
Art is top tier, everyone is gorgeous in this. The story however is kinda meh? Idk how to explain but maybe since its still the beginning, the story seems all over the place, like if the story is about the Mcs architecture skills then shouldnt he be using it more? Yet as I read it, its not even being put in the main spot & Mc keeps moving from place to place. Though its a nice read, I wouldve loved it if it focuses more on Mcs strength
This is really cool! No transmigration or reincarnation, just purely from the start, no noble background for Mc. He is just really dedicated to get what he always wanted & that is to be a knight or to shine brightly like the ones he sees from the slums he lives. He is so cool & everything just flows correctly, romance isn't really the focus but you can see that he would only have eyes for one in the future. I love how the author really put the knights oath in this story
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