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Chap 1 made me think this will be a f*cked up Mc that will rule, but after that, everything just went stale. It isn't for me even if it has great art, a strong demon king Mc who doesn't give a f*ck & do what he wants, the direction of story telling is not it. Its a bit cringe as well with the overuse of face relief. I get that some otherworldly god is behind all this & Mc is the first to be hyperaware & questions it all but so what? He doesnt even bother sometimes
I dont know, I cant even get pass 5 chaps before going back to its title. Something about this feels off, the fls attitude isnt grabbing my attention & the mls arent likeable. Why are they already smitten with her even when theyre children? & that incest shit again even if they arent blood related? Disgusting, whats with this trend that authors like??
Its got spark but since theres so many plot like this, it becomes cheap & cliche, making it not appealing to other people, & that is me. Sorry author, you have a great story in mind but theres nothing special with this one, in fact, make it yuri with the fl & Og fl instead since all we have is a mamas boy Ml, which is so disgusting.
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