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Chap 9, FL Is plain, not cute, no active, like do sth
Chap 10, she Is a naive child, not doing anything to save the Duke or vendatta against her father..... Good concepto , pero no la dio
Chap 28, FL Is the loca type, they try to make her Fun, bit It feels forced to me, like, It Is not smooth. Plot es un n desastre también, tantos capítulos y no avanzo, More like daily life of a crazy mais.... ML is not that special too, O meant, he knew Blondie tried FL bad and did nothing, según entendi
Chap 11, plot Is confusing, like she Is still existing (?) in her real body, and the Future Is ocurring, like bro
Chap 7, it's too clear that Princes and Saint wild end up together, like not good at running away, they spelled her from the country, so I would just leave, but she stayed... Also, seems to bê a misundestanding or manipulation
Chap 6, FL Is not that cute, and no power
Chap 3, só could not save her family and kingdom AND somehow, she ended on another dimension, como? Sepa deus
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