beta
It has potential but god is it ruined by everything. The translation? Could be worse but I’d like it to be legible. The art? Feels very generic and I barely feel any emotion other than annoyance. The characters? I like Abel and angry Sierra, everyone else annoys me because they don’t let Sierra speak and Sierra sucks at getting them off her back. It relies on the reader knowing this story setting and doesn’t explain mana, academy, kingdom, anything!!!
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