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10/10 the perfect romcom and it was so refreshingly original. It’s been ages since I haven’t been able to predict the ending. No uninteresting side quest or over complicated storyline. It was immaculate and the pacing was perfect. I wish the character would have been more assertive and less oblivious but I guess it adds to the angst. I hope that wasn’t the ending I really wanted more and look forward to the artists future work.
10/10
Sooo goodddd. The characters are so easy to get attached to. The pacing and regulation of character development is captivatingly intense. Everything coming in full circle makes it so easy to be reminded of where it all began and what the future might hold for it. Of course the MC is overpowered and has almost to much plot armor once again but ig that’s why he is the MC. Also romance doesn’t overshadow the plot.
9/10
Art style is great. It’s funny and has a different agenda than most fantasy action. It isn’t exactly something new but it’s refreshingly youthful with a bit of tragedy and displays real life issues and brings them to light in a feel good way. The characters are still developing and I hope it doesn’t stray from the plot or get overshadowed by the romance but I do hope it displays it just enough. I would let this marinate.
8/10
It almost feels rushed and it’s not my favorite. It has a sort of slice of life take with a bit of tragedy. I wish the trajectory of it would be defined more because I do questions the story line quite a bit. It’s a bit cringy and illogical but it does have a unique story line that I haven’t seen anywhere else. My take is that it’s just rushed however this sort of plot does have a lot of potential.
6/10
Miss girlll is eatingg. She makes pretty logical decisions. I don’t exactly know who the male lead is yet which is rare to find a story where they dont confirm it at first which is lovely. She isn’t like a perfect fl but that makes it good. Both of the ml are questionable though. I don’t know how to feel just yet lol. It’s good tho. I wish she was a lot more upfront and portrayed the confidence she had the beginning to the very end but it’s not quite over so.
8/10
This was one that got me on this website. You get submerged and almost want to manipulate the route of the story yourself but it’s so hard to be so attached to characters and just read and realize at the end they aren’t real. This story is one that gets beginners hooked. Its amazing. I love the art and love the story. It’s honestly one of the best but one of the hardest to read. One word to describe it is memorable.
9/10
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