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1, should have ended at 100 chapters. Too long. 2, Author focused too much on Aria's beauty that she ended up expressionless or too monotonous in her doll-like beauty. Her face is very soulless. 3, a large part of the story felt superficial, dry, fake and manipulative. Even romance felt doubtful. Jessie and Sarah were about the only people with sincere kindness in this story. Felt like watching Keeping Up with the Kardashian.
Disappointing honestly. Artstyle is beautiful, but does not help on plot or storytelling at all.
Slime monster is too cute!!!
Honestly, I am quite pissed and frustrated at chapter 1-30 because the MC keeps on being a fangirl. Chapter 100 above is nice as author flipped POVs to ML and Antagonist.
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