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it fucking annoys me how much backstory is still going on even by the end of season one and how lowkey weak their love story is, i understand it but it’s not strong enough to justify any of it nor does the past by the point in where im reading is strong enough to justify why he loves her sm, she doesn’t even like directly have words personal to him that guide him to bettering his situation and leading to loving her this much??? left on chapter 23, i’ll wait until more happens it’s okay..?
i’ll come back to this one, once there’s more chapters probably so there’s just a bigger grasp of the story. this story is truly so unique but i feel like the characters aren’t actually characters, i feel like they don’t have actual personalities or uniqueness to them? the plot is INSANE tho and so good, although the writing and how things progress is so predictable and thus not interesting to me. i liked her old design too tbh the pink is ehhhhhhh…. chapter 11 is where i left off
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