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plot is good but FL is too naive and just like ??? i get ur a newbie but u would think with all the novels shes read she’d know the “pretends to be ur friend but secretly plots on ur downfall” trope or something idk also i think johan met the fl when she was younger and thats why she suddenly got ill ?? or maybe hes the demon king and shes his dead wife reincarnated? idkidk just speculating
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