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SO GOOD! I LOVE THIS STORY <3 it's funny and lighthearted but also tugs at your heartstrings a bit. Lovely!! MC is a little annoying, though.
Deals with child neglect, and there's fat-phobia in here, but overall a really good story. The main character retains her morals as she's navigating her new world and doesn't try to steal other people's accomplishments/discoveries/inventions for her own gain, which I like. I will continue to read this.
"Kinky" is not how I would describe this story. I like the main character. She's really funny and her face shows more than she means it too. She's a kid in this arc, but it kind of feels like maybe they just reached the end of the first season. Maybe we'll see a time skip where she's aged up. Not sure yet. But really interested in the history of the world too. It seems to tie in with how she ended up in this world; she may have been there before....
I find the dissonance between what the MLs THINK the MC is thinking and what the MC is REALLY thinking absolutely hysterical.
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