Plot was normal can't find it though so I am just guessing. Character development should be there don't really know honestly there might be something that will change them like a big event but still will need work. Characters are so bland quite normal need more spice. Pacing will probs go downhill.
Score: 5.8/10
Dislikes: Too normal
Plot so beautiful a stick a way round. Character development already there being proven and improved every chapter. Characters all have such a personality which goes in sync with their character developments without straying too much. Pacing was surprisingly good and not out of place nor did anything feel rushed
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