beta
Not bad but the story's kinda mellow for me and the pace is a bit slow. The art is good but not really suits my taste
At first I thought this is gonna be all about cooking but alas, it also delves in other fields which makes the story more interesting. The FL is smart, cunning, talented and adorable altho the 2 older bros & grandfather had their faults in the past, I like that they're now treating the FL better - getting even overprotective of her. I ship the FL& ML They're perfect for each other
Considering that there are 2 reincarnated peeps (Dana & the young prof) and the ML has regressed, this story is rather intriguing. Altho, having 2 reincarnated people seems a bit too much but the twist that there's a person who returned to the past is interesting so I'll give this a go the execution of the story seems lacking to me tho. There's room for improvement
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