Returned to the past

This is pretty good but I feel like something's lacking. I can't quite put my finger on it.

Translation is bad. Gonna wait for a better one.

Yo, this is actually interesting and funny too Art style is beautiful. It's like a painting.

I read the novel. It's not bad but there's nothing flabbergasting about it either. I must say that I like that the FL completely abandoned her trash family and didn't even glance back at them when she was leaving the house and the trashes were desperately trying to make her stay. She overpowered them with her water powers like a queen.

FL transmigrated into a game then returned to the past. Art is pretty. All the characters, including the FL aren't fleshed-out. Character relationships seem forced. MLs changed their attitudes towards the FL fast & become interested in her quickly. Author rushed to introducing all MLs w/o even properly shaping their characters.

Pacing is fast. Overarching plot is chiché, which I would normally still give a chance, but the execution is bad. Translations are a bit off.

Transmigrated FL then regressed 3 times.

FL is so cute! FL never gives up and works hard to go back to her original world. I like her dynamics with her father, siblings, grandma & other supporting characters. She pummels anyone who picks a fight with her. She's a thug! I mean, a badass!

Story is nothing new but the execution is good.

I like the art

This is good. FL is clever & business-minded. She plans well to get back to the people who had wronged her in the past. But this story isn't focused too much on revenge. It has a balance of revenge, romance & business. ML is a green flag. I like that despite the 2 agreeing to a contract marriage, they still promised to make efforts in trying to love each other.

Pacing is alright.

Some chapters have pages in the wrong order.

FL is not physically strong nor has political power but she still tries her best in caring for her son. I can't say she's clever nor sly but she did learn a thing or two from her 1st life.

ML is the typical cold husband/father then changes attitude when the FL acts differently smh. He doesn't communicate with his wife at all.

Art is pretty, there's a cute puppy & Yuri is cute too. These are the saving graces.