Metamorphisis

It was a dark and stormy path until a hero burst forth on the scene and made it so much easier to read. Still, decent as the story is, predictable but decent, one would be ever so thankful if the confused chapters vanished into the ether so the better ones wouldn't be scattered, but we takes what we can get with a grateful heart.

This goes back and forth but is not completely undecipherable. It's a weird take on christian mythology, gets annoying at times, but it's okay for the bored reader. She spends most of her time conning the arch demons in hell while trying to bolster her family's finances and break her husband's curse.

It was great under one up-loader, then came the shit, raining down upon us mind and eye grating dialogues of unfettered vomit of the auto-translator that no one bothers to check before rushing to be the 'first' to spread crap. Still, it's decipherable, so I got through it. I'll reread when/if it's properly finished.

It's painful to get through, but it gets better, and the story is sweet. Determination and growth of the characters especially her, as she learns she's not just a machine built to get revenge, but a person who deserves care and attention as well. It was also interesting to see the spoiled, high pedestal sitting little bitch have an epiphany and slam back to earth.