The first one feels so rushed. No development was really shown, hence it didn't give any feels. Anyway, it's the common let's-pretend-as-lovers-then-we-become-a-real-couple story. Too cliche. The second one is somehow ok, but the ending is too open. We didn't even see if the uke was in love with the seme or it was just the seme. No conclusion can be made. I assume it was one sided. The third, the longest with 3 chapters, was okay, too, though it's another Stockholm syndrome case. Of course, the original guy liked was dumped since the lead was already developing feelings for his captor. The last story also looked rushed. Perhaps, due to being a one-shot that it didn't really get the chance to further explore more sides of the work. And what about the Akihito guy? He said he was serious with Sei but nothing was shown about him when Sei got his happy ending. So does it mean he was just used by Sei to distract his attention and feelings for his brother? Was he not even liked an ounce a bit? He was left high and dry. I somehow feel bad for him.
The first one feels so rushed. No development was really shown, hence it didn't give any feels. Anyway, it's the common let's-pretend-as-lovers-then-we-become-a-real-couple story. Too cliche.
The second one is somehow ok, but the ending is too open. We didn't even see if the uke was in love with the seme or it was just the seme. No conclusion can be made. I assume it was one sided.
The third, the longest with 3 chapters, was okay, too, though it's another Stockholm syndrome case. Of course, the original guy liked was dumped since the lead was already developing feelings for his captor.
The last story also looked rushed. Perhaps, due to being a one-shot that it didn't really get the chance to further explore more sides of the work. And what about the Akihito guy? He said he was serious with Sei but nothing was shown about him when Sei got his happy ending. So does it mean he was just used by Sei to distract his attention and feelings for his brother? Was he not even liked an ounce a bit? He was left high and dry. I somehow feel bad for him.