This first chapter alone reads like the fantasy story of a 14 year old they quickly scribbled onto paper and had someone draw for them. It's so rushed you can basically feel the gusts of wind in your hair.
I'm sorry, but this is WAY too lacking in the writing department. Not gonna bother with this past chapter 1.
This first chapter alone reads like the fantasy story of a 14 year old they quickly scribbled onto paper and had someone draw for them.
It's so rushed you can basically feel the gusts of wind in your hair.
I'm sorry, but this is WAY too lacking in the writing department. Not gonna bother with this past chapter 1.