Most reverse harem's and shoujo stories are like this, I don't see why you would specifically roast this since nothing here really stands out as horrible
Welp... isn't that the whole reason the reincarnated into the villain trope exists? The OG novel was a reverse harem shoujo. The comic is a reincarnated into the villain one. But as you said the mc is as pathetic as the mcs of normal rv harem shoujo and THAT is what is bothersome.
To us who like this genre is like... let me see... maybe Bella from twilight transmigrating into Katniss from hunger games and making that expressionless weird face over everything?
I feel this would be more interesting if the OG Ayne went back after dying once... at least she has personality...
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at first, i feel bad for ayne because everything just kept getting messier.
but now that i think about it, she is getting more pathetic as the story goes on, and she isn't really handling the situation well. she lacks denial in situations, and she is not good at proving points which can be so annoying. she is being taken control by the mls but she is not minding them, and complains why she's in a hell hole, but in truth, she literally made herself fall in that hell hole. if she ever denies them, she'll easily give up which is pointless and that makes her irrelevant.
i thought she was gonna be a strong fl, but she turned out to be a weak one. i gotta say this had a lot of potential, but with things getting more problematic, and the fl being pathetic, i just can't read it. but who knows? the story might pick itself back up. if that ever happens, then i'll continue reading it.