It might of felt fast because the story had no clear direction. Sure, the point of it was a company man falling for his language teacher... so why point out his inability to socialize? The first few pages established he was a bad at conversation or whatever but then how does that lead to him falling for his teacher? Then, when he couldn’t pair up with someone, that lead to tutoring outside of class? It felt disjointed and some parts didn’t really connect with others, making for a one short that felt short and in my opinion, boring
It might of felt fast because the story had no clear direction. Sure, the point of it was a company man falling for his language teacher... so why point out his inability to socialize? The first few pages established he was a bad at conversation or whatever but then how does that lead to him falling for his teacher? Then, when he couldn’t pair up with someone, that lead to tutoring outside of class? It felt disjointed and some parts didn’t really connect with others, making for a one short that felt short and in my opinion, boring