Re read it twice and its still good. The flow of the story towards the end is like when I am enjoying my bun and when its nearing the end someone just shove the remaining bun into my mouth. Would have love it even more if it wasn't so rushed (〜￣△￣)〜 let me enjoy the whole bun at a constant pace next time please (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Re read it twice and its still good. The flow of the story towards the end is like when I am enjoying my bun and when its nearing the end someone just shove the remaining bun into my mouth. Would have love it even more if it wasn't so rushed (〜￣△￣)〜 let me enjoy the whole bun at a constant pace next time please (づ￣ ³￣)づ