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glad im not the only one!! it made no sense ! bc he clearly saw that they were being affectionate and even showed signs of supporting them, and then the next chpt he suddenly loves her.. it confused me so much cuz they really had no chemistry
This was good, and I liked the end (although I wouldn't have said no to some extras) but I feel like perrat's love was forced and unnatural, they didn't have that many Interactions, and even less positive interactions before he started to show feelings for her. His feelings did contribute in weakening his resolve (or so it seemed at least) so it was useful for the story, but I still feel like they came out of nowhere.