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I agree that it's a bit awkward. Especially her realizing she's a guy. That whole couple of scenes was awkward. I think the original story is probably better with flow. https://www.wattpad.com/story/49978982-fujoshi-trapped-in-a-seme%27s-perfect-body-yaoi
Thanks for the link. (▰˘◡˘▰)
i'm curious about the next chapter.. But the way it's written is a bit.. ehm, weak ? I like the story line but the flow of the story doesn't feel right... (Please don't hate me I'm just having my opinion about it) Maybe this will change in the next chapter though ┑(￣Д ￣)┍