It’s like the author wrote the story but forgot that readers couldn’t read their minds...

Tanakasbabygirl April 29, 2021 8:59 am

It’s like the author wrote the story but forgot that readers couldn’t read their minds and left out every key detail. The story just lacks cohesive details to make it smooth but at least the art is rlly nice

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    sweety1997 April 29, 2021 9:50 am

    we need a handbook to accompany us and fill in the gaps in between all that is happening haha

    SatanBeastie April 29, 2021 11:24 am

    I don't think it's that hard to understand, other than the king's medicine/disease I understood everything

    Tanakasbabygirl April 29, 2021 11:36 am
    I don't think it's that hard to understand, other than the king's medicine/disease I understood everything SatanBeastie

    It’s not about understanding rlly, like we can get the gist from what’s happening in the drawings but it’s more about how the story flows. It doesn’t have a natural progression