1. The author mightve changed their mind alot along the way. There was quite a lot going on and the premise doesn't cover the new information.
a. During the climax, the sun stone's relevance just keeps changing its function or how it is used. it doesnt give the reader much to contemplate on how it should or would be used.
b. Who and what is Misha exactly? After that sudden appearance to apprehend or drag Paolo about birth and stuff, he disappeared.
c. The white and black wolf's connection isnt that impactful. especially Gabriel who is apparently the only weilder of the sun stone because of his ancestry. Even his ancestry is muddled because the death of his parents weren't cleared. Why did his mom knkw that theyd be attacked? how was it that they were killed so easily?
d. father domingo was indeed dropped and it's painfully obvious.
Overall, even if the general arc is about the revenge of the black wolf against the vampire, it missed central info about the story and there are alot of unnecessary details.
If the author and the illustrator had more time and had less production issues, as theyve said in the end, then maybe the story wouldve been fleshed out more fluidly and naturally.
1. The author mightve changed their mind alot along the way. There was quite a lot going on and the premise doesn't cover the new information.
a. During the climax, the sun stone's relevance just keeps changing its function or how it is used. it doesnt give the reader much to contemplate on how it should or would be used.
b. Who and what is Misha exactly? After that sudden appearance to apprehend or drag Paolo about birth and stuff, he disappeared.
c. The white and black wolf's connection isnt that impactful. especially Gabriel who is apparently the only weilder of the sun stone because of his ancestry. Even his ancestry is muddled because the death of his parents weren't cleared. Why did his mom knkw that theyd be attacked? how was it that they were killed so easily?
d. father domingo was indeed dropped and it's painfully obvious.
Overall, even if the general arc is about the revenge of the black wolf against the vampire, it missed central info about the story and there are alot of unnecessary details.
If the author and the illustrator had more time and had less production issues, as theyve said in the end, then maybe the story wouldve been fleshed out more fluidly and naturally.
★★★