I don't want to insult the work or author and artist but the story and writing is really.... all over the place. I mean one minute she's in a banquet hall where the ml is making his appearance second minute she's shouting at ghosts like is she shouting Infront of everybody..? She's in imperial palace one moment then her home the second. She found her sister saying she's seeing something weird or something weird is happening then she's running away next moment to find her...? Then she meets a ghost who helps her find her sis and take down the evil spirit and now ranon appears the second she calls him, are they allies or some shit didn't they just make a deal? also ranon is obediently listening to her commands. Here I am sitting confused with a ???? Sign on my forehead. The story is weirdly paced with no build up whatsoever..
I don't want to insult the work or author and artist but the story and writing is really.... all over the place. I mean one minute she's in a banquet hall where the ml is making his appearance second minute she's shouting at ghosts like is she shouting Infront of everybody..? She's in imperial palace one moment then her home the second. She found her sister saying she's seeing something weird or something weird is happening then she's running away next moment to find her...? Then she meets a ghost who helps her find her sis and take down the evil spirit and now ranon appears the second she calls him, are they allies or some shit didn't they just make a deal? also ranon is obediently listening to her commands. Here I am sitting confused with a ???? Sign on my forehead. The story is weirdly paced with no build up whatsoever..