I need someone to convince me to continue reading lmao I’m currently on ch.7 but i have ...

ConstantlyConfused May 8, 2021 4:27 am

I need someone to convince me to continue reading lmao I’m currently on ch.7 but i have a couple issues.

-I feel like his ‘beginning story’ like him dying and all that shit from his enemy and yada yada was done too fast. There’s no emotional connection to his past life, like explain why that guy was your enemy, explain why that maid was so special to you, why she stood with you to the end(I think that’s what he said about her) but the backstory just ends too quickly. It could’ve been done really well in just one chapter. In fact, if people read villainess manhwas you always see some good backstory that gets you hooked on the main character that makes you root for them to get stronger. Or even other types of stories like this, such as solo leveling, the beginning after the end, omniscient viewpoint reader etc...

-the explanation of the whole system isn’t very good?? Maybe it’s the translation but if it isn’t, it’s confusing how he doesn’t recognize this weird system notification pop up, but understands the entire thing by the same chapter and talks about using it in his past life?? I know it’s probably the book but the fact he’s able to use the whole system so well when it’s been what like a week since he started using it and he’s already completely understood it?

-it seems like a good story, but the whole explanation of the system and the story in of itself is confusing, just my opinion tho lol

Responses
    Luffy May 8, 2021 8:12 pm

    Read it!!! Don't stop there!!
    He's going to take revenge on some bastards and it's hilarious to watch him blackmailing those idiots
    I love the story itself though could be tough to understand at some points but be patient

    .... May 8, 2021 8:15 pm

    Yeah... I can't be help with this one, I just feel like this is just in your face and straight to the point, instead slow and steady.

    I'm really just staying for the art and the fights. And I'm really excited to see if he's going to travel into different "Dimensions" like the "Murim" world or a world with dragons and sorcerers, Or even a modern world like "solo leveling" with people who have powers.

    Yes... This story is a little fast and Pacy, But I like the concept of other dimensions and trading from other worlds.

    Luffy May 8, 2021 8:26 pm
    Yeah... I can't be help with this one, I just feel like this is just in your face and straight to the point, instead slow and steady. I'm really just staying for the art and the fights. And I'm really excited t... ....

    I would say the story has its own buffs so read when you feel like....but the thing about crossing dimensions...I don't think that's going to happen... it's more like he can do everything like using martial arts from murim world and using mana and aura of his own world.... he's becoming more like a prodigy...

    derrrp May 9, 2021 3:50 pm

    okay to be fair though, the system looks like its not that difficult to use