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I wonder what kind of person like this? Not trying to say it in a derogator...
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I guess you could call it sexual liberation after 33 years? But girl, after...
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i could see this as a like 10 volume josei, but even as a oneshot, its enjo...
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It was wayy too rushed tbh, the mc is a bit one dimensional and I'm really confused on how she seems so easy to get drawn in by every guy in the story - esp her colleague that suddenly was head over heels for her when you didn't get to see any signs before that one scene. It felt weird and added in to force a conflict with the other colleague she so called 'loves'. She was way too wishy-washy through the story, ofc I can understand having some struggles when emotions are involved but she just let everything happen without putting any thought into it - also very subjective sidenote but they did her dirty with that short pixie cut or smth at the end ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍