Ok I thought this story was pretty good but I was surprised to see people complain in the comment section so I’m a bit disappointed
-I thought overall the story was cute and pretty funny, I was smiling of the cuteness and the funny moments
However not every story is gonna be perfect, it’s quite impossible so here are my thoughts! Also I vaguely skimmed people’s comments so I’m just gonna casually address people’s issues
So the stalker Hae in was kind of a useless plot but the story is not done, so I won’t assume anything yet. Because maybe something might happen later on idk
The problem with the writing of the female lead wasn’t that she was flat, i thought she was a pretty 3dimensional character?
My issue is with having the author make her the damsel in distress, I feel like the female lead is a very strong character and I think it would’ve been more powerful to have the female lead stand up for herself against the rumors and bullying from the teachers and students etc.
I felt so frustrated for her and just having a guy speak for her and save her from the situation just felt like ugh for me, because as a woman we go thru such troubles no matter what we do. We always are criticized so it would’ve been nice for her to a powerful speech and not take shit from anyone
Ummmm that’s all? I kind of thought the male lead was kinda flat as a character? So I’m not sure why people are calling the female lead flat when i think it’s the male lead.
Also, second couple so cute, but I want more stories on them on their situation cause it looks like the girl’s parents are always making her go on dates or soemthing ? Idk.
Omg I wrote a whole ass essay on this when I can’t even do that for school but if u read this through omg I love u and let me know ur thoughts!!!
Ok I thought this story was pretty good but I was surprised to see people complain in the comment section so I’m a bit disappointed
-I thought overall the story was cute and pretty funny, I was smiling of the cuteness and the funny moments
However not every story is gonna be perfect, it’s quite impossible so here are my thoughts! Also I vaguely skimmed people’s comments so I’m just gonna casually address people’s issues
So the stalker Hae in was kind of a useless plot but the story is not done, so I won’t assume anything yet. Because maybe something might happen later on idk
The problem with the writing of the female lead wasn’t that she was flat, i thought she was a pretty 3dimensional character?
My issue is with having the author make her the damsel in distress, I feel like the female lead is a very strong character and I think it would’ve been more powerful to have the female lead stand up for herself against the rumors and bullying from the teachers and students etc.
I felt so frustrated for her and just having a guy speak for her and save her from the situation just felt like ugh for me, because as a woman we go thru such troubles no matter what we do. We always are criticized so it would’ve been nice for her to a powerful speech and not take shit from anyone
Ummmm that’s all? I kind of thought the male lead was kinda flat as a character? So I’m not sure why people are calling the female lead flat when i think it’s the male lead.
Also, second couple so cute, but I want more stories on them on their situation cause it looks like the girl’s parents are always making her go on dates or soemthing ? Idk.
Omg I wrote a whole ass essay on this when I can’t even do that for school but if u read this through omg I love u and let me know ur thoughts!!!