This is my humble opinion but it would be nice if: 1. The flashbacks at the right moment of pinnacle is not desirable. 2. To be a hero/heroine and a vegetarian ( not hurt or kill any evil people is quite disheartening. 3. Not having any power and trying to be powerful is quite futile in the story plot. 4. The emphasis on animals character is funny but not suitable. More like used it for the purpose of saving the main character or helping hand. 5. When there are immediate issues and the two main character flirting is frustrating to watch. Make the story flow with few flashbacks in between. P.s. I love the story and the build up. It's just my opinion, so keep up the work you are doing and keep striding for a big change and I Know the author can-do great things more so in the future. Best of luck....
This is my humble opinion but it would be nice if:
1. The flashbacks at the right moment of pinnacle is not desirable.
2. To be a hero/heroine and a vegetarian ( not hurt or kill any evil people is quite disheartening.
3. Not having any power and trying to be powerful is quite futile in the story plot.
4. The emphasis on animals character is funny but not suitable. More like used it for the purpose of saving the main character or helping hand.
5. When there are immediate issues and the two main character flirting is frustrating to watch. Make the story flow with few flashbacks in between.
P.s. I love the story and the build up. It's just my opinion, so keep up the work you are doing and keep striding for a big change and I Know the author can-do great things more so in the future. Best of luck....