I thought this bitch was annoying and cringy asl. I had to stop reading a few times in hop...

Rosetta red May 27, 2021 4:08 pm

I thought this bitch was annoying and cringy asl. I had to stop reading a few times in hope of character development. The way the stories written is a bit sloppy. like, its everywhere. The only thing she thinks about is Raon. So, she ain’t remember her parents. her past life. If she alive or not.

I feel like, they tried to hard with the whole edgy teen thing idk. The “I don’t eat with my parents like normal teenagers” scenario was just embarrassing/cringey to me the way she said it etc. Then there’s her personality. she’s so creepy and childish to me, like she follows this dude every where, and clings to him. She even says she cares for him more than herself.

she still crazy, but I feel it dies down a bit after she’s like 14-15. Because before she literally threatened the knights and looked through like 7-9 mountains to find this dude with one knight. she did this with out raon even knowing. he ain’t even want her there she threatened to use his father against him.

Idk, i know it’s suppose to be out love, but she ain’t right, and the story is also rushed at certain parts. like, with raon almost killing his father, them aging, etc. Also It’s like they emphasize on the fact that’s she’s a crazy stalker, she says it herself several times as well. It’s just weird to me how she claims herself as a stalker and knows it but won’t stop.

I can say this though, there are only two scenes I genuinely liked. the scene where the inn keeper calls him her brother, and he mopes about it. And when she confess to him and he blushes like a damn tomato lol.

I’m still confused on how he still likes her. after she literally used to torture him and now she’s obsessed with him. he don’t find it weird the 360 personality change. Ik he noticed the flower thing but still. It’s kinda like those cliches when the fml is abused by the mls in the past, but they still find a way to love them. Also yes Ik the bitchy fml and the stalker one are two different people. I just wanted to clarify

Responses
    Swyoon May 27, 2021 4:29 pm

    I honestly couldn't have said it better. Unfortunately, I dropped it at like chp13 since her stalkyness was to much for me. Like, she literally abused him. No one is a saint, and if you are, I feel so freakin bad for you. Honestly feel like this man is just so deprived of love that he'd except any.

    And yea, the stalky FL is rly annyoying, and she even admits to forcing herself into his life which she has no right with the body that she possesses.

    In my opinion, it would be more enjoyable if she just like silently fan-girled over him, while slowly making him realize she was different now. It would still be messed up, but not as much.

    natsuhi May 27, 2021 4:42 pm
    I honestly couldn't have said it better. Unfortunately, I dropped it at like chp13 since her stalkyness was to much for me. Like, she literally abused him. No one is a saint, and if you are, I feel so freakin b... Swyoon

    Agreed. The pacing of the story is just too off

    Rosetta red May 27, 2021 5:00 pm
    I honestly couldn't have said it better. Unfortunately, I dropped it at like chp13 since her stalkyness was to much for me. Like, she literally abused him. No one is a saint, and if you are, I feel so freakin b... Swyoon

    I 100000% agree to that. she should’ve slowly and properly rather than jumping on him. he’s gonna be confused on love. no one loved him, then all of sudden the girl who tortured him is obsessed and “loves” him. I feel like the mental trauma is high in this one but is being ignored.