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LOLz May 29, 2021 1:12 am

honestly, really good story but I wish they'd put as much effort into the plot as they did into the sex scenes, there's so much material in the characters for a better story and it could have had way more chapters and better flow if they had delved a little deeper but on its own it reads like a Wattpad story written by a 13 year old <3 I do like it tho

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    Fan.ghorl May 29, 2021 10:26 am

    I super agree! The story telling sucks tbh, and i just came from the author's other story and dropped it because of the same reasons. Now i'm here just staying because of the switch lol