
Ikr!!! I mean, I excepted something like atleast a common plot where the fl would plan to drive out the one who killed their family in the past and things like that but like... Singing a song? How the hell does that help u take revenge? ( I mean it's good that she's making singing folksongs to be okay in their country and all but like how the hell is that a part of the plan for revenge? )

exactly like idk how that even counts as a revenge ?? i mean its not like that song started the war and killed everyone so yea i dropped it after knowing that i kinda expected the plot to be a lot more interesting i mean dont get me wrong it is pretty good but the revenge part is kinda disappointing

Agreed. I dropped it too in the middle of the story when all the plot was about was just everyone literally simping for her. Took a peek a while ago and the current chapters we're her singing infront of everyone. I mean you are right, the story is pretty good but I'm definitely not gonna start reading it anytime soon. And yeah. The revenge part is disappointing. AND ONE MORE THING, The plot literally moves to flippin slow. The chapters are literally like 100 or even more before she even got a timeskip :T

Also is it just or do the villains seem overly villainous? I mean seriously I feel they are just bad to bad there is no depth. Also that one kids mother should not be treated as a villain she be treated as someone who needs mental help. Calliope only good thing was to get kid out of situation but way the dealt with mom was lazy.

If you're talking about the pink haired guys mom then i Definitely agree, she shouldn't have been treated as a villain , she needed mental help because of the trauma she had when her daughter died. She couldn't cope with things. but if you're talking about that trash of a mom who beat her kids. Oh please that bish deserved what she got and even more.

Lmao that kind of plot twist would make the story better ngl. ( Atleast i think so ) The spirit who seemed to be on her side turns out to be evil and the enemies she thought killed her fam turns out to be the one who tried to help her in the end. ( It's such a common plot now but honestly that would be pretty okay )

For me, there’s too many plotholes for the story to be good. It had awesome potential, but then it just goes downhill. When she was 5 years old she looked 12?? And the adults did nothing, it had to be the children who solved everything, yeah I know it’s fantasy but it kinda irked me. Also dslr camera in victorian setting? Yeah no, that story is just not for me ( ̄∇ ̄")
This is how you write powerful reborn young girl, I’m still traumatized with lady baby ( ̄∇ ̄")