Yeah!

rainbowslider June 6, 2021 8:24 pm

This is how you write powerful reborn young girl, I’m still traumatized with lady baby ( ̄∇ ̄")

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    Phantomhive June 7, 2021 7:57 am

    What happened in that one?

    nightmare June 7, 2021 1:27 pm

    lmao why ?? i kinda dropped it so

    Anna June 7, 2021 1:30 pm
    What happened in that one? Phantomhive

    It’s about this girl who died in a previous lifetime and gets reborn into her younger. I liked at first but the MC is way too broken and honesty the epitome of a Mary Sue she always gets rewarded for doing basically nothing and she born talented.

    Joon June 7, 2021 1:32 pm

    This ain't bad like lady baby, Lippe talking when she wasn't even like 1 or 2 was creepy as fuuuuu—

    nightmare June 7, 2021 1:38 pm
    This ain't bad like lady baby, Lippe talking when she wasn't even like 1 or 2 was creepy as fuuuuu— Joon

    lmao yea ikr and also i stopped reading when i realised that her form of revenge is singing a song or something???

    Joon June 7, 2021 1:45 pm
    lmao yea ikr and also i stopped reading when i realised that her form of revenge is singing a song or something??? nightmare

    Ikr!!! I mean, I excepted something like atleast a common plot where the fl would plan to drive out the one who killed their family in the past and things like that but like... Singing a song? How the hell does that help u take revenge? ( I mean it's good that she's making singing folksongs to be okay in their country and all but like how the hell is that a part of the plan for revenge? )

    nightmare June 7, 2021 1:51 pm
    Ikr!!! I mean, I excepted something like atleast a common plot where the fl would plan to drive out the one who killed their family in the past and things like that but like... Singing a song? How the hell does... Joon

    exactly like idk how that even counts as a revenge ?? i mean its not like that song started the war and killed everyone so yea i dropped it after knowing that i kinda expected the plot to be a lot more interesting i mean dont get me wrong it is pretty good but the revenge part is kinda disappointing

    Joon June 7, 2021 2:02 pm
    exactly like idk how that even counts as a revenge ?? i mean its not like that song started the war and killed everyone so yea i dropped it after knowing that i kinda expected the plot to be a lot more interest... nightmare

    Agreed. I dropped it too in the middle of the story when all the plot was about was just everyone literally simping for her. Took a peek a while ago and the current chapters we're her singing infront of everyone. I mean you are right, the story is pretty good but I'm definitely not gonna start reading it anytime soon. And yeah. The revenge part is disappointing. AND ONE MORE THING, The plot literally moves to flippin slow. The chapters are literally like 100 or even more before she even got a timeskip :T

    nightmare June 7, 2021 2:27 pm
    Agreed. I dropped it too in the middle of the story when all the plot was about was just everyone literally simping for her. Took a peek a while ago and the current chapters we're her singing infront of everyon... Joon

    yea another reason was also the slow pace like she was kid since when bruh 100+ chap in the beginning it was really cute and fluff but at some point it kinda got annoying ...oh finally she is singing front of everyone ig thats some progress ? lmao

    Anna June 7, 2021 4:10 pm

    Honestly, why does even trust random creature that appeared before her? Maybe folk songs are dangerous for reason and she is being tricked by said spirit. I still don’t understand how can everyone be simps for she little does nothing of note.

    Anna June 7, 2021 4:13 pm
    Honestly, why does even trust random creature that appeared before her? Maybe folk songs are dangerous for reason and she is being tricked by said spirit. I still don’t understand how can everyone be simps ... Anna

    Also is it just or do the villains seem overly villainous? I mean seriously I feel they are just bad to bad there is no depth. Also that one kids mother should not be treated as a villain she be treated as someone who needs mental help. Calliope only good thing was to get kid out of situation but way the dealt with mom was lazy.

    nightmare June 7, 2021 4:22 pm
    Honestly, why does even trust random creature that appeared before her? Maybe folk songs are dangerous for reason and she is being tricked by said spirit. I still don’t understand how can everyone be simps ... Anna

    yea like why didnt the spirit help in the previous timeline?? hmm i dont remember about the mother thing you mentioned tho ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

    Joon June 7, 2021 6:59 pm
    Also is it just or do the villains seem overly villainous? I mean seriously I feel they are just bad to bad there is no depth. Also that one kids mother should not be treated as a villain she be treated as some... Anna

    If you're talking about the pink haired guys mom then i Definitely agree, she shouldn't have been treated as a villain , she needed mental help because of the trauma she had when her daughter died. She couldn't cope with things. but if you're talking about that trash of a mom who beat her kids. Oh please that bish deserved what she got and even more.

    Joon June 7, 2021 7:02 pm
    Honestly, why does even trust random creature that appeared before her? Maybe folk songs are dangerous for reason and she is being tricked by said spirit. I still don’t understand how can everyone be simps ... Anna

    Lmao that kind of plot twist would make the story better ngl. ( Atleast i think so ) The spirit who seemed to be on her side turns out to be evil and the enemies she thought killed her fam turns out to be the one who tried to help her in the end. ( It's such a common plot now but honestly that would be pretty okay )

    Anna June 7, 2021 7:55 pm
    If you're talking about the pink haired guys mom then i Definitely agree, she shouldn't have been treated as a villain , she needed mental help because of the trauma she had when her daughter died. She couldn't... Joon

    Of course she did that bitch got what she deserved. To me that seemed like the only true villain to me her and the tutor.

    rainbowslider June 8, 2021 8:33 am
    lmao why ?? i kinda dropped it so nightmare

    For me, there’s too many plotholes for the story to be good. It had awesome potential, but then it just goes downhill. When she was 5 years old she looked 12?? And the adults did nothing, it had to be the children who solved everything, yeah I know it’s fantasy but it kinda irked me. Also dslr camera in victorian setting? Yeah no, that story is just not for me ( ̄∇ ̄")

    nightmare June 8, 2021 9:43 am
    For me, there’s too many plotholes for the story to be good. It had awesome potential, but then it just goes downhill. When she was 5 years old she looked 12?? And the adults did nothing, it had to be the chi... rainbowslider

    lmao ikr its like everything she does works out and everyone simps for her even if she just stands there and breathes xD